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I love it! I have since the beginning.

"It's an amazing story. I like all the plot twists and that Scarlet and Aiden finally kissed along with the fact that Cassy met Sabrina and Jason. There needs to be a part 2 bcz Kiara hasn't spoken to Sabrina and Jason and what did Xavier mean when he said that ge wasn't her father? "

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Same senario also in my house as urs😣😣

"U have written correctly i dont think it need any correction..... Its perfect according to me.... The story u have written in that u r 17 i m also 17 yrsold...... I also have same senario in the house😣😣😣"

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Nice

"I liked it SALTS!!!😂"

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Gucci story

"I’m tryna earn me some karma here💯💯 but this is a hecka lit story I say🙌"

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Nice one

"Nice one, want to read more"

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A New Life

"This is so good i love it i cant wait for another update on whats going to happen."

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Book

"Intresting book "

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A New Life

"I love this soooo much, its an amazing story SOOO TALENTED"

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A new life

"Aw sweet come on that's it u got me on my toes again "

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Binge-worthy

"I read all 28 chapters in 2 hours and made an account just to comment on this ongoing book. The plot is great! There are so many twists and turns and it doesn't feel too forced. The grammar gets hard to read but got better throughout the book. Some parts feel poorly explained (I don't want to spoil of course) and could've been expanded on but it's definitely not a deal-breaker. I'm hopeful that you'll come out with more chapters soon!"

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It's intriguing and interesting

"I like the story line, it's an interesting story with a lot of suspense. What I dislike is that there are some errors from the spellings not all though. The writer should take note of that. I would recommend d book to a friend of mine who never believe in being independence."

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Makayla

"Sooo good. I low-key hole they dates or sum"

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spelling and grammar mistakes in each chapter

"The grammar and spelling was horrendous in each chapter. Felt like an english teacher marking essay writing. But overall, the storyline and suspense,the plot twists ,etc is very good. "

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