Mute
This is for my amazing sister grace and Georgia shout out to alessabarnes for the sapphire queen
Sam
I was crying in my pillow and bang "get up it is your turn too wash the floors now go you know that I hate waiting" principal Ross said and dragged me by my hair to the cleaning room , threw me in the mop bucket and Said. "There is a royal coming at 5 so get the food ready" and left.
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After I finished the floors I had 30 minutes to do the food I was going to make lasagna, salad, noodles and chicken . " Hurry up and get the food ready"principal said and I nodded and got to work with the food " don't worry about them" melody said she was a voice in my head and my only friend l, she understood me.
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Adliric
I was going to an orphanage to support the kids by having dinner with them in half and hour almost there
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I just arrived at the orphanage and an amazing scent of vanilla and rose caught my scences " mate" my wolf liam said as we entered the dining room " Sam get here right now " the principal yelled as a young girl about 18 entered " hi what's your name" I asked her " she doesn't speak" a young man said " mmy name is Sam" the girl said as everyone looked at her in shock " so you can speak" the principal asked her " mate Sam " my wolf said and we ate in silence
Sam
" Sam get here right now" principal yelled as I ran into the dining room " hi what's your name" an unfamiliar voice said " she doesn't speak" Tom said before I spoke for the first time in 12 years "mmy name is Sam" I said as everyone looked at me in shock "so you can speak" the principal said And we ate in silence
Thanks this is my first book please comment
Great start, small advice Try to go a bit slower.. awesome so far, love you started with POVs nice!!
Nikita, your story description left me gasping for air. Maybe some commas, eh?
I love fantasy. So short. We need more.
It’s great to meet you, Nikita! I was just diving into "The Forbidden Alpha" and the immediate tension you’ve established between Elena and the Alpha is really striking—especially that sense of being drawn to someone who is fundamentally dangerous. When you were first conceptualizing the Alpha's character, did you always intend for his presence to be so overwhelming and magnetic, or did that intensity develop as you explored the power dynamic between them?