What is your opinion?
The dark Phoenix MC
"I liked it!!! Loved the story"
This Girl MC book was the best… By Far
"Everything was so unexpected and it was a blast reading about a female MC. Love this book!"
The Dark Phoenix MC
"Great story Revenge can be a rough road to climb. But love and faith brought this together"
Enjoyed
"I really enjoyed this book and I am looking forward to reading more."
Dark Phoenix MC
"Great story thanks for your work, can't wait to read the rest and any other stories you have 👍☺️"
Love the book. Please make a series out of this
"I am in the middle of this mc book and hope you are going to have more books on this mc . It's really be good "
Amazing
"Love the book I know it's not finished but so far it's amazing "
The dark Phoenix MC
"It has a few confusing words, misspellings, and wrong input of characters. other then that I love the story. Some chapters are way to short to be even a chapter too."
Need more
"I need more of this story and it to be finished"
Overall View
"The book is amazing. Please do the world a favor and keep writing books. This is the best book I have read in a while. And that says a lot because I read a lot, like everyday. Keep writing and don't give up no matter what anyone says. You are AMAZING!!!!!💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖"
Crossed Chains 'unedited'
"There was 'alot' to like about this story ! The characters, specially the female lead was awesome, interesting plot. Really enjoyed the chapters where it opened with a quote / saying. I found I had to re read a lot to try and make sense of parts, and at times I wasnt too sure who was saying what. But as Jes said - it was unedited ! Overall I enjoyed the story, would like to read the edited version ! It could be a really good series "Dark Pheonix MC Books" - Fingers crossed. Thanks for a good story Jes, hope to read more of Mila, Sharp, Draven and Crew in the future. "
Great story, needs a little bit
"Absolutely love this story line and characters. It has a few things that need a little bit of help but has tremendous potential for excellence. The timeline needs some clean up and some clarity. Some areas seem impossible to happen in the amount of time given while others the time is vague enough that you can't make heads or tales of the moment. The rushed events toward the end also make it a little more confusing and difficult to put in perspective of when things happened. It has some clean up needed for in correct words used and pronoun errors. Keep at it and great work author. "
A great plot
"The author has written a great story plot. It needs a thorough edit (which they are currently undertaking) and some more detail adding but it’s a quick read to pass some time that isn’t a bad start to a good book"
