Inkitt
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So addicted to this story

"I'm hooked. So much detail I could feel the emotions from the vivid images in my head as I read. But does Talon ever find out about what his mom did to Robin and if she ever got pregnant? "

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Mine

"This story is very good but different. "

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Nice

"I like it a lot. "

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This has blown my mine

"This is a great short story that’s not meant for everyone and certainly have to keep an open mind. Relationship like this doesn’t occur so often but I’m sure it happens. The flow of story was actually very good and strangely keeps you wanting more. "

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Good

"I really like it so far. "

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Interesting

"I'm quite enjoying it. Let's see what happens next. "

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Good

"I like the plot but few scenes did disturb me but its fine, if you tolerate this kind of theme you should try it "

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It"s Just Amazing!

"More Please!"

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Good

"The book is good. "

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My son

"Great book"

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Loved it!

"This story is so good!! "

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Good job!

"The plot was a bit odd, but interesting. I liked the chemistry between son and mom, but did not like the apparent need to kill anyone."

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Love

"Love the stort wish it was longer "

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Ending isn't what I expected

"Coool stuff"

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Ears

"Kinky...interesting and naughty"

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Nah

"All over the place, random, rushed. There's a lot that needs to be worked on. "

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