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Loved it

"The story is realy good but have so many left out pieces that makes the story rushed in the end. But still loved it"

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Can't stop reading!

"The book is absolutely amazing. Really enjoyed it. Very well written,good plot,nice story to enjoy."

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Lady of Ravendale

"I really liked it"

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Lady of the Ravendale

"I really enjoyed this story!! Thank you so much for sharing your work!!"

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Lady of the Ravendale

"-There were some spelling mistakes in every chapter, but they were rather minor -also grammatical errors, however it isn't THAT bad -interesting plot with the different countries cultures, such as females having more control over men in Ravendale, but in Etria, men and women are equal -left on a cliffhanger (sob sob) -a little sad that i have to go onto wattpad to read the sequel, but I'm still satisfied with this story :) -overall very enjoyable and was my first book I finished :D"

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Lady of the Ravendale

"I love the story. It was exciting and I got to know about a new culture. I was too much intrigued by this book it was hard to leave in the middle. There are some things I would like to say. The story was good but if you mention the one who is telling the story at the time would be better because I got confused in some parts about who was the one that is telling the story. And in the middle I got some parts like that are said by a third person so I would like to suggest that if you use a different font style on it, it would be easier to understand. I am not saying it offensively but I just thought about being honest with my viewpoints. Overall I liked the story very much. Keep writing and keep allowing us to read more interesting stories like this. "

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Rise

"I am enjoying the writing style. The plot is interesting and makes me want to read morez"

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Good

"It was a g story"

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Lady of Ravendale

"I really enjoyed the book and its a shame the sequel isn't on here though. "

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Great read!

"While there were a lot of grammatical issues, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece and wanted to say congrats to the author for making something so amazing. The plot was very intricate and well developed and the relationships between the character were awesome. Looking for what happened next kept me on the edge of my seat and I can't wait to read more."

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THIS IS SO GOOD

"Waaaaah i love this story!!!"

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Amazing and Unique

"The author's style and plot was one of a kind. I love that I couldn't guess what would happen next and was always anticipating what the next chapter would hold. Amazing job."

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This is story is so good

"Okay, the plot is very good without a doubt. This author surely knows how to make a refreshing stories. The grammar is still need improvement, with the imrovement this story can become a bestselling book. I will be reading the author's sequel 'Queen of the Ravendale' on Wattpad."

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Nice story

"The story takes you to a fantasy world, with lots of twits and turns. I love the fact that the main personage is a strong and intelligent young woman. I really enjoyed reading it and I certainly will check out the sequel!"

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I Like your book✨

"The plot is very interesting.It’s become one of my favs.Good for you.👼🏻♥️"

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Plot is superb.

"I LOVE THE PLOT! I was looking for syntax issues ect but I just got lost in the plot. Lol I noticed a few things here and there. Just run it through one of those free grammar checker softwares. "

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A very refreshing book

"I never read such a book and this author really made a reverse harem genre more refreshing. If you are tired of the reverse harem cliches then this is the book I recommend reading! "

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Good

"So good and interesting ❤️"

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Nice

"This story is different from other regular love stories. The story moved smoothly and is interesting. But the chapters where she accepted marriage, that she isn't getting divorced felt inconsistent. Because of the contract she distanced herself from her husbands and Elizabeth and even asked for early divorce. So how come she easily accepted her husbands decision without any resistance or fight when all the time she's thinking about getting divorced and settling in another country. "

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Great Book

"2 or 3 words with a spelling problem to be expected when writing a book this long. But overall well written and different from anything i have ever read. This is the first eview i have ever written since i started using this app well deserved. I can't wait to see what the author comes up with next."

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