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Enjoyable read

"I have to admit that I have enjoyed the story so far. I enjoy the characters of the story but do have issues with the elaborate words, someone once told me,"keep it simple stupid. " using complex descriptive words only confuses the reader, the use of common language will work better for you and your readers. The story itself is great, your imagination is awesome and the material is gripping. I love Choles character and can understand her fears as far as relationships goes as I had an abusive upbringing thanks to my so called mother. Trusting someone and allowing yourself to love has been a hard challenge in life. It took me years to allow myself to finally allow myself to trust and love my wife, so I relate with Chole in that way. I look forward to where this story goes. "

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The writing 😍

"Expertly written! I haven't put it down all day !"

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Dreadfull desire

"Such abrilliant book I fell in love with almost every character and the 🔥 hot stuff OMG I would love to have done the research with you sooooo sexy Ive had countless day dreams and lost myself in fantasy land on both the sub and Dom side of these scenarios, yum yum yum, if I had one criticism it would be the over use of some of your wording ie orbs instead of eyes hues instead of colours I feel awful saying this considering how fantastic I thougjt the book was but personally I would rather read it how people naturally speak. Having said all of that where can I get book 2 pleeeèeaaaase love it love it love you 😍 ❤️ xxxxx"

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This is everything

"This book is everything. Honestly, I suck at writing reviews, so I normally won't if there's a word requirement, but I had to for this book. This is my first dive into anything more than short stories, and I was hooked by the first chapter. "

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Dreadful Desire

"My all time favorite book! Absolutely a must read for anyone who enjoys erotic books. I'm hating the cliffhanger! I need more. Off to read part 2"

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A MUST READ 😍😍😍

"I’ve never read anything like this!! The way the author describes every little thing especially the BDSM scenes— Chefs kiss 🤌🏽🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵 I definitely would recommend this book for everyone to read. The cliffhanger at the end of the book though 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺"

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Dreadful Desire

"Love the details. Would recommend it to everyone who is into BDSM"

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Dreadful Desire

"Such an amazing awesome novel I love it I'm hooked! "

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Sometimes you just need to talk

"Loved the way clhoe learned to slowly open up to Axle hope there is a second part"

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A Must Read!!! You won't be disappointed.

"This book is absolutely fascinating. The author captures your attention with their keen descriptive details. I feel like I'm actually experiencing every word I read. I've laughed, cried, closed out my phone but came back because I needed to know what happened. The erotic scenes are phenomenal, descriptive and enticing. It's the perfect mix of emotions. The characters captivate your mind and the plot twists keeps you on the edge of the your seat. I recommend this book 💯. Thank you author for helping me to enjoy reading again. "

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Elzette

"Very good. Love the story Cant put in down "

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Dreadful desire

"I’m lovin this book"

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Worth the read

"This story was very much needed. I migrated from WP just to read this story and it was totally worth the change. The vocabulary and grammar are spot on and it makes me just want to keep reading."

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Dreadful Desire

"Absolutely amazing. What a amazingly talented writer. Her attention to details/feelings are exceptional as it makes you feel everything like you are there. Truly talented and such a page turner. Great characters and character building. Get ready for an amazing roller coaster of a read. You won't be disappointed."

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Good

"Good so far"

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Dreadful desire

"This is an awesomw read cant wait for more"

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Dreadful desire

"Wonderful story so far can't wait for the rest!!!"

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Has Axle got a brother? Haha

"Loving this story! We all need an Axle in our lives!!!"

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Couple things

"When is she going to open up and trust him to be the guy he wants to be for her"

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Woowow

"Something tells me there is more to Chloe’s past than what she just told Axle. It’s like she is not telling the entire truth behind what happened to her mother that day"

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