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Great read!

"I’m really enjoying reading this. Everything that is happening to these two girls is terrible but at least they have each other. Christina also has a really good family and I’m glad that they like Amy because she needs that attention from a parent that she’s not getting from her own. Hopefully everything gets better, I especially hope that Jasmin finally gets a clue."

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More Than A Pretty Face

"Absolute Masterpiece for your first book ❤️ Loved they’re chemistry and seeing both PoV about there emotions and how they both evolved so much . Frankly you could have make it at least twice longer 😂 that’s how much I loved it , would be nice to see how they relation continued when in college and starting work u til deciding to get a family together. Thanks for this amazing story I will come back another time to read again . ❤️"

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One of the best books I’ve read.

"I enjoyed the connection between Amy and Christina. I like that neither pushed the other into feelings they weren’t ready to admit. Great story, I really enjoyed it."

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One of the best I've read

"Really loved your story, you built amazing dialogue and characters. I felt a real connection with Amy, then as time moved on with Christina and the slowly unfolding feelings between them. You have beautifully written a wonderfully compelling plot that kept the reader continuously engaged and slowly built and built the tension to a crescendo between these two leading ladies. You didn't' disappoint when you got to the sexual aspect and so authentically and eloquently described the details of that, I find most writers don't seem to get that quite right or bring it in far too early, you built up to it so gradually and did it so so well... Thanks for blessing us with your writing, can't wait to read more x🙏❤️"

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One of the best I've read

"Really loved your story, you built amazing dialogue and characters. I felt a real connection with Amy, then as time moved on with Christina and the slowly unfolding feelings between them. You have beautifully written a wonderfully compelling plot that kept the reader continuously engaged and slowly built and built the tension to a crescendo between these two leading ladies. You didn't' disappoint when you got to the sexual aspect and so authentically and eloquently described the details of that, I find most writers don't seem to get that quite right or bring it in far too early, you built up to it so gradually and did it so so well... Thanks for blessing us with your writing, can't wait to read more x🙏❤️"

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When’s the next chapter?

"I know you’re probably busy with your other stories but can you please finish this one too after you finish the other one? Thanks"

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Review.

"Seems like your novel makes everyone stay up late, including me. Keep up the good work 👍🏼😁"

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More than just a pretty face

"God that was such an amazing book to read. I'm so glad I decided to read it as I really enjoyed it "

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Love it

"I love your book"

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More Than Just A Pretty Face

"I loved this book so much, the plot was well thought out and it never ceased to surprise me"

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Great

"Absolutely love it so far, the tension building between the two was fantastic! Hope the author has more! "

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More that a pretty face

"Written nicely "

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More Than A Pretty Face (GxG)

"The author caught the characters personality perfectly, I couldnt have been more please as i continued through the story. Its was beautiful, sensually, detailed and over all relatable. Best story i have read in awhile and cannot wait to continue to read other stories by this author."

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OMG!!

"This story was really well done!! I liked how it had enough of drama because thats what makes stories interesting lol... The plot was very good, everything was in correspondence and didn't seem rushed. I love the bit of mystery and suspense keeping me on edge and sometimes making me doubtful.... I loved the different POV's and was able to properly distinguish between them without reading the heading because of their distinct personality traits, I especially found it funny how Chris was more honest to herself for having lewd dreams while Amy tries stop or justify herself. Their love story was really nice and I was able to experience the various emotions which some other stories fail to depict. There were some grammatical errors and I thought the layout of the text could be formatted in a way easier to read especially when there is dialogue but other than that I loved it and thank you for making me feel all the emotions. Good Luck in your future works! : )"

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A good read to relax your brain with a emotional ride

"I liked the way author had portray emotions of two teenagers but i felt there is some lacking in the way she frame the sentences "

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Sorry, but I hate titles.

"It's a great feel-good novel. Only minor grammar mistakes. Amy's jokes are corny, but they did make me smile more than once.. Nice work, author! "

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More than Just a Pretty Face

"This book was truly amazing, literally one of the biggest things I look forward to all day and constantly has me on the edge of my seat. There was a couple grammar problems but in the end, the book was still one of the best I've read. Looking forward to all of your other books. "

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Thank you

"Not going to lie, I most definitely binge read this in one go. It’s absolutely brilliant. The characters feel realistic and capable to find the reader caring for them. Seeing their relationship blossom, the challenges they overcome and how they care for each other. Without a doubt a must read. Thank you and keep up the incredible work! :D "

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I love it

"It’s funny, which I love, it’s also shows that women are badass and the whole story is just great."

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More than just a pretty face

"Great book well written. great job keep it up."

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