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false vampire love

"I love the story cause I usually have a thing for fantasies"

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Outmatched potential

"So far i really like the story! Try to space out the paragraphs so the readers dont get confused and try to use more intriguing grammar! Other than that i really think this story is awesome so keep up the good work cant wait to see more!"

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Twin

"Very interesting..keep it up bruh"

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