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The Elementalists

Summary

A girl who wants to find where she belongs, she has woken up in a strange place, but that place could be what she was looking for? We'll see.

Status
6yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

The beggining

You're about to embark on a journey that will forever change all that you know about yourself...

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But before we learn who you will become, we need to know who you are now.

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The wind whips across your face as you race through barren trees, trying putting some distance between you and the creature chasing you!

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Shadow monster: RAAAAAGHHHHHH!!

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The force of the monster's roar shakes the ground beneath your feet! You trip at a edge of a pool of black water, catching a glimpse of your scratched and muddy face in the process...

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You: Come on, get up. Keep moving!

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You dig your fingers into the black soil, pushing yourself toward the mirror you've been desperately seeking...

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You: Just... a little... further!

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When suddenly the beast crashes through the trees just behind you!

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Shadow monster: RRRRRROOOAAAAGHHHHH!!

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You roll onto your back as the creature thunders toward your prone body!

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Out of options, you throw your hands up, and a searing energy pulses through your fingertips!

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You: Yeuguang Trabem!

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You bolt upright in your bed, clutching your chest.

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Eli: That... That felt so real!

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Your phone buzzes aggressively on the nightstand, and you look over to see that it's almost ten. Your alarm has been going off for almost two hours.

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Eli: Crap! I'm gonna be late for that meeting with my advisor!

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You scramble out of bed and dash to your closet to throw something on...

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Once you're dressed, you bolt out the door...

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...Not noticing someone watching you from inside the mirror.

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Refelction: ...

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You run into your advisor's office without a moment to spare and drop into the chair across from her desk.

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Eli: Sorry! I overslept.

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Ms. Robertson: You're not late, so that's quite alright, Ms...

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She rifles through some paper on her desk.

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Eli: Just Eli is fine.

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Ms. Robertson: Eli, right. Forgive me. I'm used to dealing with more... troubled students.

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She finds the right file and slides behind her desk. As she scnas the pages, she frowns.

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Ms. Robertson: By all accounts, you're a perfect student. It's only a couple of weeks into the quarter, but your grades and attendance are excellent. So, I've got to ask, Eli. Why are you here?

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Eli: It's hard to describe. I know I should be happy. But I'm just... not. I try so hard, but no matter what I do, it all just feels like... like I'm sitting in a waiting room or something. And no one ever calls my name.

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Ms. Robertson: And... what is it exactly that you're waiting for?

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Eli: A magikal world.

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Ms. Robertson: What?

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Eli: I want to live somewhere exciting and extraordinary! A place where absolutely anything could happen. That's not too much to ask, is it?

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Ms. Robertson: Those are certainly some... original aspirations. But I can't help you live in a fantasy world, Eli.

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Eli: Yeah, I know. I'm only joking. I just wish I knew what I was looking for. Whatever it is... it's not this.

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Ms. Robertson: I know you're at a crossroads right now. And one of the directions you could go would mean dropping out of Hartfeld.

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Eli: It crossed my mind...

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Ms. Robertson: Please don't do it. When this phase you're in ends, you don't want to discover that you've given up your chance to get a degree, do you?

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Eli: But... but what if you're wrong? What if it's not a phase?

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Ms. Robertson: I tell you what. Why don't you go home and think about it? Will you do that for me?

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Eli: Sure. I... I quess I can do that.

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Later,you stand in the bathroom of your suite and look at yourself squarely in the mirror in front of you.

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Eli: I know you belong somewhere. I know there's more to you than this.

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Suddenly, the lights in the room flicker!

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Eli: What the hell...?

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Something catches your attention out of the corner of your eye... A glint in the bathroom mirror.

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Eli: Huh? Why do I look like this? What the hell!That's... That looks like my face, but...

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You raise a hand to your face, but when your reflection doesn't move, you freeze.

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The mirror itself looks a little odd... Almost shimmery.

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Eli: Am I... Am I dreaming again?

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You reach a shaky hand toward the mirror, and when your fingers touch the surface, they press into the glass!

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Eli: Whoa!

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You try to pull back, but your hand won't come free!

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Your palm starts to sink into the glass, then your forearm, and before you know it...

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Eli: Wait, wait, wa--

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Your whole body is sucked through!

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Rushing water yanks you forward, forcing you to squeeze your eyes shut against the current!

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Just as you feel your lungs starting to strain, a splash comes from your right! You feel a pair of strong, sturdy arms wrap around your middle and pull you to the water's surface!

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You feel yourself being dragged onto dry land and sputter as you wipe the water from your eyes. You try to get your bearings, taking a moment to gape at your surroundings...

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Eli: Wh-Where...

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I love this story book...... But unfortunately I was not able to complete it. I wish that I can the know the end here...

6 years

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