Inkitt
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Interesting!

"The plot is really amazing and I like how you played around it. Really enjoy the story and I adore your writing style,"

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Mesmerising and Bizarre

"I stumbled upon a gem... The plot in this book was mesmerising, creative, bizarre - this was certainly something I don't come in contact eery day. The plot with the shadow children and the acts of people, who could see them was amazing, I loved how the characters were forced to change in the end of the book. The writing style was rich and had interestingly placed sentences, that I thoroughly enjoyed. On a another note, sometimes the present tense was mixed in with the past tense, also it's and its were confused in places. There was a handful of missing commas inside the dialogue brackets, sometimes there were missing words in the middle of sentences. Anyway, the grammar overshadowed an otherwise spectacular story, I think proofreading could aid in making this book stand out and sparkle. ^^ In the end, I loved this novel to bits. And I'd want to urge others who would be interested in fantasy to pick this book up. "

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