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Mistake

"Very slow and not moving well "

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Perfect 💕

"I love it......"

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The mistake

"Absolutely love it.. But really was your last update in April.. I can just imagine how many people are waiting on the new chapters come now really "

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Mistake

"It is a really interesting and original story. I haven’t read one so good, I am really enjoying it and cannot wait for the update!!"

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Best book ever

"Please keep updating"

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A mistake

"I love this story "

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A mistake

"I really like this novel, very creative and great plot."

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I love this, please continue updating

"I love this, please continue updating it "

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Can't wait for an update

"Love it, can't wait for another update"

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Good

" Update update update!!"

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KEEP READING

"At first I thought ok this is about to be another cliche mafia story. Whatever I'll keep on reading since I'm bored. All I have to say is thank God I didn't quit reading. I'm loving the plot like so far. I'm also enjoying Rachelle's character quite a bit. She really reminds me of myself the way she feels and reacts to things. Very relatable and definitely allowed me to get more immersed in the story "

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Great

"It should be more detailed but its very interesting tho"

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I like the plot. It is a nice one. Also i love Rachael and her amazing humour and wit. Plus, even george has a mysterious aura around him.

"Nice one . Loved the plot till bow"

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Mistake

"Talk about the wrong place at the wrong time. The plot is interesting to say the least. The characters fits the plot but I racheal. She is scared but does what she has to."

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Bittingnailsformore

"I love the story line And the characters. I love how it's not a fall in love at 1st sight it seems like it's going to be a progressing love which is different. Can't wait to continue reading please keep updating in writing. "

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It's a good piece

"Well i am just taking interest in this story now.. it seems to end well i hope ..best of luck.. good job"

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Great

"The plot like is absolutely great. I will definitely recommend this author and continue watching for any upcoming stories that she may write"

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A Mistake

"I really enjoy their relationship so far. I feel like maybe I haven’t seen her full personality yet, but I’m excited to see more of it as I read"

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The Mistake

"The chapters i have read are written well in the sense that excitement is built in each chapter. The plot isnt the usual scenario so its refreshing. Hope we get to read more chapters soon ❤️❤️❤️ Looking forward to the coming chapters. Thank you 😊"

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A Mistake

"I DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW TO EXPRESS HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS STORY! THE DYNAMIC IS SO BEAUTIFUL, ITS SO REFRESHING TO READ ABOUT SUCH AN INNOCENT, CLUMSY, CLUELESS CURVY BEAUTY TO END UP WITH A MAFIA. I CANNOT WAIT TO READ THE REST OF THIS STORY."

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