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Good!🙂

"I hope I don't offend you in any manner. It is just my honest review. The story was actually good. It would have been great if you could have lengthened it a bit. You can't send letters if you don't know where the person is, so that part of letters doesn't add up. To describe the feelings of them in more detail would be good. And the story in all sounded rushed. The plot was good and even the story too. Your writing style is fabulous. And honestly, your hard work is appreciable. You can't just make this kind of story in a spur of the moment, it needs a brain to think about this. With some adding of characters and some more plots, it has the capability to be a good story. This was my review as a reader. I really don't mean to say it was bad, it is good but a little more of working on it and it would be great and best. I hope you take it positively. Keep writing, your content is excellent.😇🙂👍"

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Don't trust everything you see

"I loved the plot twist, i usually don't read mysteries but this is a amazing story, just that you should try to improve a bit on your writing style, instead of always putting : you can put ". But i still love it!"

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Twisty tale

"A strange tale with a nice unexpected twist"

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