Excellent writing

"The reason I gave an overall score of 4 out of 5 stars is that I felt the stretching part was overly descriptive and it pulled me out of the story a little. I enjoyed the shadow boxing part a lot, as well as the more brutal part that followed. The hallway scene was especially well done. The story as a whole is excellent. Robbie's feelings throughout are palpable, but I think the story's strongest point is the writing itself and the wide range of vocabulary and imagery. I'm not a native English speaker myself and I've had to look up words and terms more than once, which shows that I've still got a lot to learn, heh. The imagery provided is strong and colorful, and it made the story a pleasure to read. The conclusion was well done, with how Robbie overcomes his stress. I did wonder if little kids are allowed in such events, heh. Overall, a great piece of writing, but I'd be careful not to overly describe the more technical parts."