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"This is a good plot but it's sometimes a bit unclear where Eaglepaw is or if she's remembering something or dreaming. Are you going to show Crowpaw a bit more?"
"This is a good plot but it's sometimes a bit unclear where Eaglepaw is or if she's remembering something or dreaming. Are you going to show Crowpaw a bit more?"