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Love, loss, new beginnings, and so much more

"I loved this story. It had everything, love, loss, new beginnings, and so much more. I cried more than once. The fact that the story mirrors part of the author’s life makes it more special. (Thank you Violet for sharing.)This author is extremely talented. I am in the process of reading all of her stories her and on Galatea. "

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Wonderful Story

"Another beautifully written story with powerful characters. Love your stuff!!"

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"Let me get the bad out of the way because the list is so short that it's almost not worth mentioning. There were several spelling/grammatical/punctuation errors and one instance I consciously saw the wrong name being used. Now for the good (and there was SO much good)...The plot was so amazing and well laid out that I couldn't bring myself to pause long enough to add paragraph comments for spelling/grammatical/etc. corrects. I have dealt with addiction in people close to me and the way the author helps to focus on the effects addiction has on the loved ones of the addict was amazingly and devastatingly accurate. This story is about love, but more importantly, it's about survival. It's about surviving the sadness, guilt, anger and pain of loving someone with a drug addiction. It's about lope, loss and forgiveness. This story may be a shorter story, but it did not fail to hit its mark. "

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Good

"Good read, although names often mixed up which could be confusing - needs proof reading if to be published beyond inkit. Liked"

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Undone

"Sensational!! A heart wretching story. True realities about addiction how it affects us All, that it's okay to keep living loving and continue to create good memories despite the pain of addiction. Thanks for sharing your trauma love and challenges 💯🤍💯🤍💯🤍"

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Good

"I really like this book. I would recommend this book to anyone. The reason why I choose this rating is that this book is really good."

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An incredible book

"I love all the writer's books, but this one was very emotional and realistic at the same time. I recommend it for readers.The love story is incredible. "

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Beautiful story

"Beautiful heart wrenching story. I’m in awe at the author ability to incorporate both the best and worst that can happen in life within the same story. It felt real, beautiful, sad, and heartwarming at the same time. And James makes me swoon 🥰 All of the main characters are well written and I enjoyed their dynamic. The smut is top notch!! "

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Undone

"Loved it..though there were some character's name confusion, still..its good!! Steamy sex too..loved it to bits!!"

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Amazing

"I love this book! You are a great writer! Please keep up the great work!"

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Tracey

"I’ve read this story three times now I don’t think I can ever get bored reading it and I know I will read it again thank you for an amazing story "

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Undone

"I loved the book. Congratulations!"

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Undone

"Absolutely amazing and beautiful story 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖well done Author"

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Damnnnn

"So so so good. This story I can’t even explain. I’m going they a difficult time in my relationship and this book kept me sane. It took me to another life. Lucy’s. I genuinely could escape reality. Thank you. I didn’t want to read the last chapter because u was scared it was ending. I was scared to have to be pulled back into my world. But here we are! Thanks for this novel!!!"

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Unexpectedly and Irrevocably Phenomenal.

"Ok so when I first started this book, I was like, 'ok.... interesting.....' and as I got further along, the more interested I got. Near the end it hit real close to home for me. Going into chapter 2 of the book, I didn't think that by the end I'd be crying. Thank you so much for sharing some of your darkest moments even if they weren't chronicled exactly how they happened. "

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Undone

"Such a beautiful story about true life. Ttotally worth reading. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️"

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Undone

"I loved the story. Thank you "

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Hooked!

"Daughter falling for Dad’s best friend? What could go wrong! Lol.. love the twists & turns. "

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Undone

"A very good story 💗💗💗💗"

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Undone

"Such a great story! Heart wrenching at times. But thank you for writing about the realities and trauma of addiction, sexual assault, and love and relationships that may be considered unconventional. I was crying, laughing, anxious, saddened, and happy all throughout the book. There were some grammatical issues, nothing that I couldn't quickly work through. There are a couple chapters with the wrong names, it would be helpful to have them corrected so it would flow better while reading. Towards the end of the book, I had wondered if some of this was written from a personal perspective, and that was confirmed. Thank you for sharing those vulnerable pieces of your life with all of us. I'm putting this in my favorites to read again!"

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