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What is your opinion?
Forbidden
"Story is excellent I miss the gifs "
Nice!
"It started juicy as heck! "
Good plot , minor grammar errors, good outline of the sty
"Good plot Good character development can't wait to see where The writer takes the story "
Forbidden
"Great start"
Eden is not so desirable
"It’s hard to tell what gender Eden is until several chapters in. There is nothing redeeming about the characters. The author makes no attempt at caring about any of the character. Sex seems to be the only intent of the writing."
So far
"I haven’t finished but it seems interesting so far."
