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The Girl In The Sea

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Summary

A poem through the eyes of a shy woman struggling to find herself

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

Poem

Her eyes were bright, flecks of yellow.

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She smoked cigarettes, as she hated cigars.

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She maintained a comfortable existence,

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but she prevailed that summer.

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A marvel of construction.

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The mounting color on her round cheeks.

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Sleepless nights, consuming flames.

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But there wasn’t a reason to submit.

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That water was delicious.

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She rested her eyes upon the sea,

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gazing upon intruding lovers.

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A lady in black, lurking close behind.

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Her little neck was bare.

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Her awkward, childish bow.

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The strike of the piano sent a shiver through her soul.

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She was ill and desired rest.

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The mosquitos bit her firm,

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but the stinging was numbed by her fear.

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The sea’s voice was seductive.

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Enfolding her body in a cold, close embrace.

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Did you enjoy my story? Please let me know what you think by leaving a review! Thanks, madisonpardue

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Heartwarming

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Shocking

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Good Writing

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Good Writing

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Great Character

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Strong Dialog

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Strong Dialog

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