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my brothers best friend

"ummm you knida missspeled some words so its kinda hard to know whats going on time to time but over all this book is great"

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My brothers best friend

"I like the characters and the forbidden love. I recommend to all. And I chose these ratings because the book truly is amazing."

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My brother’s best friend

"I really enjoyed the book, and I hope there will be more of it either another few chapters or a 2nd book. I am happy for Hadley, but I also feel bad for Shaw, I feel like he was changing and since he had to let her go he spiraled, or maybe it is that he hadn’t changed and would have cheated on Hadley. Just sucks that she will probably never know the truth. And Oddly while I appreciate that Levi took care of her, it seems without Shaw he’s lost too or never changed. The pace of the story was nice, I feel that the portrayal of a guy who is out being promiscuous and doesn’t know how to settle down was well played. I also see a lot of how some young girls, including myself get totally wrapped up when an older guy or the popular guy or the bad boy pays them attention. About the only complaint I had was whenever the story was loaded I think some sentences got swapped or words are missing but enough was there to infer what it should have said."

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My brothers bestfriend

"Finish it please, so good so far but I can’t bear to stop reading and please I want to read a good ending not hanging"

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Pregnant by my brother's best friend

"Interesting book. Well written, it's more like what happens in real life then a fiction novel. Author can continue the good work."

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💜💜

"Thank you for sharing your wonderful work."

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Best friend

"I love it so far can’t wait to keep reading"

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My Brothers Best Friend

"I really liked this story! The ending for Shaw was sad tho. I kinda wish him and Hadley got engaged instead. Keep writing amazing stories plz"

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Love it

"Love how this book began, made me like it at first an drug me in to keep reading"

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It's just amazing and fabulous

"I like this a lot "

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Good storyline

"Great storyline and great characters "

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My brothers best friend

"It's a good book, but next time some proof reading for typos would be a good idea."

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Please tell me more is coming soonnnnnnn???

"Please tell more more os coming soon....I'm loving this "

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My brother's bestfriend

"Such a wonderful story that must read .its so exciting to read it until the end. I like ot because it has a light story. I will recommend it to my friends. I rate this story because its so nice"

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My brother's best friend

"Interesting story, I am curious to see how this relationship will blossom."

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My Brother's Best Friend

"Enjoying. Waiting for updates"

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Shaw

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Good but bad

"The book is a great book essentially but the writers grasp of the English language and grammar along with punctuation is disappointing. It makes the book difficult to read and Understand at some points. If this could be corrected it would make the book a much better read. However, despite these issues I continue to read and look forward to hearing that Shaw and Hadley are finally together."

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Good .

"Good book so far. A lit if emotional back and forth. Entertaining. I would recommend this book to friends."

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Good

"Good story line. Could use a proof read and some parts could be clearer but I'm enjoying it. Worth reading."

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