Run
Run,
Focus,
Duck,
Slide.
"He's getting closer Harry."
"I know."
"Run faster Harry."
"I'm trying!"
"You're not trying hard enough Harry."
"Shut up!"
"Watch out Harry!"
Duck,
Trip,
Fall,
Crawl,
Run.
"Help Me!"
"I can't Harry."
"Yes you can!"
"You forgot Harry."
"Forgot what?"
"I'm dead Harry."
"I can see you but!"
"Just keep running Harry."
Shove.
Stumble.
Run.
Run.
Run.
Run.
It's always a symphony of nightmares.
Never going the way he wants.
Never staying.
Never wishing.
Never stopping.
He can only run.
Hey!
I just finished your story and honestly, I can’t stop thinking about it. The characters, the emotions, the atmosphere,it all felt so real and pulled me right in.
The whole time I was reading, I kept picturing it as a comic. Your storytelling has such strong visuals, I think it would translate beautifully. I’m a freelance artist and I’d love to help bring it to life if that’s ever something you’d be interested in.
No pressure at all! If you’re curious or just wanna chat, you can find me here:
𝗗𝗜𝗦𝗖𝗢𝗥𝗗: (𝐥𝐢𝐳𝐳𝐢𝐞𝐝𝐨𝐞𝐬𝐢𝐭𝐚𝐥𝐥)
𝗜𝗚: (𝐥𝐢𝐳𝐳𝐢𝐞𝐝𝐨𝐞𝐬𝐢𝐭𝐚𝐥𝐥)
𝗘𝗠𝗔𝗜𝗟: (𝐥𝐢𝐳𝐳𝐢𝐞𝐝𝐨𝐞𝐬𝐢𝐭𝐚𝐥𝐥)
Thanks again for such an incredible story,it really stuck with me.
Cheers,
lizzie