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The Naughty Spaceholder

"OMG!!! I cried so much at the end. The whole story was a tear-jerker for me with how he treated her. There shouldn't have been a need for a "spaceholder" It was clear as day that they both love each other, they should have just admitted it sooner. I was sorry that they died in the end I'm just happy that they died together and they were able to let the other know how much they loved each other. And the fact that they died holding hands and he got to leave his mom and dad a last message telling them they were loved broke me. I loved this story. They did their HEA just not the traditional way. "

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Hmmm

"Well done! Sad ending. "

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The naughty spaceholder

"As much as I wish there could be a sequel where they were eventually saved by the medics and get to live their love life to the fullest & make a family, I can’t deny that I love the story, finished it in less than a day, excellent job 👍🏻"

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❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

"Started this book this morning, a few hours later in tears I had finished it. This story took me through all the feels. It was wonderfully written with a few spelling mistakes and punctuation errors, but it takes you on a journey that makes you forget all of those details. Love between best friends, steamy scenes, clingy gfs, twists and turns. It's a good twist on a BFF love story and boy does the twist at the end hit you right in the gut. A happily ever after story, just not as you know it. Thanks ❤️ 💋 14/01/2023 "

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Book

"I really like this book "

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Sad

"If it had to end like this, at least they were together. Please rewrite "

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Good

"Such a hypocrite! Still he cares"

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Cliff hanger!

"I really like your story. Amazing indeed! However, please revise the ending. Nobody wants a deadly sad ending. Remember, most novels and authors gets recognition if the love stories have happy endings."

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Ghbibbubb

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Derek and cathy

"Nice story. Heart touching. But there are some grammatical mistakes."

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Naughty spaceholder

"Simple and sweet...the story kept me engaged and I really enjoyed the story .. especially the relation between Derek and Cathy was amazing ..so understanding so caring for each other..just loved the story .. enjoyed a lot 👍👍💕"

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it was amazing

"this was probably one of the best books i've ever read and n this app couldn't put it down the whole day that i finished it i get the emotions of the characters throughout the book and am still crying in class writing this review i would 10/10 recommend to anyone."

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The Naughty Spaceholder

"I wanted to give this book a bad rating so bad because of the ending but I couldn’t. This book is such a good reminder that life is life. It’s not linear and everyone doesn’t live it the same. It was beautifully heartbreaking and a wonderful read. Highly recommend. "

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I don't recall

"Interesting but not enough sex."

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Praise

"Life has enough sadness, speaking as a widow and a cancer survivor both happened when I was very young, couldn't you give us a joyful happy ending.....we need that but as the writer you have the right to do as you see fit. Sadness is all I feel. Life does that already but we keep going knowing everyday we are blessed!!! Trying to see some good in this story......"

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What

"How dare you make me cry like that ?!?!"

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Great book with an unexpected twist

"It was a great novel, loved the storyline. The ending was a little depressing but really beautiful overall "

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Cute story

"It's a great story for sure. Derek is funny"

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My Thoughts

"The end caught me off guard for sure. I loved this story because it may be a few from many but these things do happen in reality. I am sad that at last minute is when they said what really mattered. But I'm kinda happen they were together as well. I am also happy that women car blew and she died. She was annoying me big time. Fo'real, fo'real!!! But damn. Very beautiful story. A life lost is always sad. These two were beautiful all round and deserves to experience more. Smh! Thank you for sharing your talent, skills and imagination with us. Very beautiful.💯💖"

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Great

"Oh, the ending had me. I never expected that to happen. Gosh, and I had loved Derek. I honestly enjoy reading your books"

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