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Engaging

"When I started reading it I never thought that I would read it in one go. The plot had so many twists and turns that I couldn't stop reading it. The way you described the whole story is just perfect. I suddenly got invested in the character of Serene and cared for her. You should write more stories because I would love to read them. You have a talent. And your writing shows the hard work you put into this story. Hope to read some more stories soon."

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Serendipity- The purity of serene won my heart

"Serendipity- The purity of serene won my heart. And Ramon is love too. The name itself justifies the work. Won my heart. Keep up!"

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Outstanding!

"Such an intriguing start! Whoa...kept me hooked! Nice way of writing like past and present, which keeps the reader Guessing.."

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Consuming content

"The writing is so good that it consumes you completely and you start living the story. The writer is good with selection of words and ideas. Keep it up. "

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Amazing

"I just loved it.Its a wonderful story.keep writing and yes waiting for Next❣️keep it up."

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WOW

"This is art! The way this book is written is amazing. Keeps you gripped! I love it how the chapters are a little blurred, you'll have to put in some effort to connect them (I had to re-read once). But the story is worth it. Can't even guess what'll happen next. I'm definitely getting hooked onto this one. Waiting for updates!"

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Mesmerizing

"This story is so intoxicating. Love found in one of the darkest places. Learning about what they saw that was horrible while also learning about their bond was amazing. I loved this one! I couldn't put it down, my wife recommended it and I read it within like minutes or an hour. The most lovable thing I read, illuminating...❤ "

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