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Great book

"Great book, interesting, sad, funny "

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Good

"I love this so far. "

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Alpha Asher

"Thank you for writing amazing stories. Love your writing. Please don’t let this be the end of this book. Please update more chapters "

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OMG

"I FREAKING LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!!"

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Alpha Asher

"I enjoy the book and the author is good in keeping your attention to the story. "

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Alpha Asher

"A lot of plot twists!"

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This is one of the best Alpha Asher books I’ve have read

"I liked everything about this book from the beginning to the end "

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Alpha Asher

"Great great great book "

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I like it.

"It’s a very good story line. I can’t wait to finish it."

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Alpha Asher

" so far i liked everything,, just curious about the theme of the book I'm enjoy it 🤗 keep it up🔥"

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Alpha asher

"Good book waiting now for the rest "

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Alpha Asher

"this story was the best story ever and right now I am in class and I just got done reading this book and it literally turned me on"

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alpha asher

" This story has made me feel many things. I love the way that the Author expresses the characters emotions and the way that the authors expresses the places. I can’t wait to see how Asher reacts to the whole situation. Thank you for writing such an amazing story!!! I would recommend this story to anyone that is very interested in to Alpha books. I think that this book covers many of the aspects of. It includes the possessive and dominant alpha and also the not so submissive but submissive “Luna” I love the story so far I can’t wait for the next update!"

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Alpha asher

"I thought the book was great with a suspenseful story line. I enjoyed it alot and characters were great as well."

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Alpha Asher by aurora

"Great so when are you going to update this story it just stops, nothing else"

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Alpher Asher

"I really love the book. I cant put it down but iwould like to know when will you finish it"

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Asher

"I love this book it’s interesting. I’d recommend this to all my friends and family. I rated this book great cos it is"

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The

"Review the book when it ends"

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Good progress, still room for improvement

" Characters jump emotionally from America to China, there is not a smooth transition and it feels shortened "

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