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WOW 👌

"I was completely lost in this book world...amazing story loved everything about it!"

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A harsh, tender survival

"In its opening chapters, Last to Fall delivers a brutal yet unexpectedly tender survival story. A falsely accused woman fights to stay alive on a hostile alien world, where every vine, beast, and human is a threat. The quiet, wordless bond she forms with a mysterious native creature elevates it beyond a simple fight-or-flight tale, hinting at a complex connection in this unforgiving place."

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Intense Worldbuilding Already Hooked

"This story has such a powerful and dangerous atmosphere the world feels brutal, emotional, and full of mystery I really love the survival energy mixed with romance and tension. I’m curious though... do you think Alita will become stronger because of Xanadis, or will the planet slowly change who she is completely? I feel like her journey is going to be unforgettable 🔥"

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Rewritten masterpiece

"I thought they first one was excellent but this reimagined book is outstanding. All the characters are well thought out and developed, and each add something significant to the plot. Azriel and Alita's love story is so special and beautiful. The plot itself cleverly unfolds with lots of twists and turns. It's a rollercoaster of a journey and a compelling read. The cliffhanger at the end will lead nicely onto book 2. Well done author. 100% recommend "

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جيد

"جيد "

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Last to fall

"Great story! I live the story line. I haven't read one like it! "

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Shezk

"🌻I love, love, love it...so engrossing & so spicy but please WHERE IS THE REST OF THE STORY!!!"

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The Last Fall - by: B. Shock

"I'd initially found and begun reading this book (re-written version) on WATTPAD, as that's my one & only, fave reading app. Wishing to avoid the "slow, torturous death" of waiting for an update, I'd hoped to find the Book completed elsewhere..So, here we are: Inkitt..and not complete. Howeverrrr, not all is lost. Let me share my thoughts/review so far.. The thing I love about great authors/writers/novelists etc..is their ability to masterfully weave words into an inescapable, well structured, Web filled adventure.The Last Fall, will pull you into a gut twisting roller-coaster ride full of twist, turns, highs, lows, loops & barrel rolls,leaving you on the edge of ya seat and desperately wanting for more. THIS author did that for me. With a Solid grip on my 'nuts', my full attention & devotion locked in, with the intention to read the entire book from start till finish, without distraction, by the end of the 1st chapter! The author also had pre-warned us to expect grammerical errors & such, and to kindly point them out, as the book is being re-written & yet to be edited. Truthfully, that alone usually puts me OFF from investing my time on a book. Not in this case. I can honestly say, from Azriel's stealthy & violent appearance/debut which launched him into Alitas life, I've been so deeply & vicariously absorbed in his & Alita's plight, I confess to swiftly skimming past errors, big & small, (I never miss those!) save for a few *corrections I'd marked in the margin of the paragraphs, in regards to accidental mixup of characters names, made by the author. I have read & added a few of BIOSHOCKGRL's novels on WATTPAD to my 'Reading Lists' (sadly, most are incomplete) but still very much worth checking out & supporting!! I'm a big fan of her writing style. 🙌🏾🏆🏅 {CAN YOU PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEEEEEEASE, FINISH THIS Series OFF FOR US or point us in the direction to find/purchase the completed novels? We, Your true loyal supporters. 🙌🏾🙏🏽❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥} Alrighty, so to finally conclude my thoughts: 🌟B. SHOCK is A brilliant Fantasy writer. A Creative & deeply profound storyteller whose writing style will attract & captivate audiences who thrive on high adrenaline fueled challenges, danger, intrigue, gore, action, unique kinks, 'the unknown,' posses gigantic testicles,(questionably sane) and are sexually adventurous/curious, free spirited & open minded and don't mind some long winded, draaaagged out, slooow burning, repetitive situations, but still holding on coz when shit gets interesting, IT'S REEEEALLY interesting,therefore making it somewhat worth all your extended eyerolls and deep sighs of frustration? (lol) Then This story is for you. 🎯♥️ Give it a go! Xox "

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Last to fall

"I need more !!!! "

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Something new

"This was so interesting. New setting and who would have thought aliens would be interesting to read. Something new for me, plus the writer keeps you intereated to read the next page."

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I’m not good with writing so my uimpotent is limited to by like nearly zero so yea but I think everything looks great and I like the suspense that it gives me so yea I’m good

"On the title but my stuff up there by accident so sorry "

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Couldn’t put it down.

"I just found this book yesterday and I finished late last night. I now it’s being rewritten but I am so sad that I caught up so quickly. This book is so good that I couldn’t put it down. The details, the people, and the love between the two characters. I want/need more."

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Last to Fall

"One of my fave reads"

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New updates

"I am loving the new updates"

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Jfhfjf

"Jfjfjfjfjf"

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Last to fall

"The book as been amazing and has completely captured my heart. I have been absolutely consumed in every chapter and I would recommend it everyone"

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The first book that stole my heart

"This was the very first book that made me fall in love with the characters of Azriel and Alita. I laughed, I swooned… and yes, I cried at the end, thinking their story was over 😭 But to my surprise there WAS more! I dove straight into the second book, devoured every chapter, and now my heart is completely full (and maybe still recovering) ❤️"

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Last To Fall

"I could not stop gushing to my friends about this book. I love the unique character design and hints of humor. I also really loved the plot. I love extreme fantasy like Aliens, Demons, Angels and so on, so this really had my attention. Can’t wait for more like this❤️❤️"

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Fantastic read

"I'm absolutely loving this book. I can't wait to read the entire series. I really like that it's not exactly like every other alien romance novel out there, it's got a unique take that feels both familiar and new all at once. "

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One of my favorite novels!

"I loved everything about this novel. Besides grammatical error here and there, I’d love to be able to buy this if it ever came out as a hardback novel. Im not necessarily a fan of his name bc it doesn’t seem to fit his personality at all. But that’s just my little opinion. Again, amazing story all the way through. "

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