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What is your opinion?

The new girl

"The book is amazing so far. New chapters soon. i hope i am enjoying the read. I will let everyone know it would a great story to read. I have also given 5 stars."

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jlbrown82

"Good first chapter. I can’t wait read more. "

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Excellent

"I enjoyed the story line. The characters I thought were well written. I thought possibly the seduction could have been spun out a little longer bearing in mind the fact that Katie is a very shy person. Being a dirty old man I did find the seduction part quite arousing,"

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It is suspenseful and interesting it keeps you intrigued and wanting more

"I don’t hate anything and would recommend it to my friends "

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The new girl

"Love this book. Great from the beginning "

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It was a beautiful story

"It was a beautiful story and interesting"

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The New Girl

"The story was a good one."

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Ok chapter not bad.

"Pretty good chapter just to word out the review enough to skip over this part and open the done box on the app so I can read something else."

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The new girl

"I don't like the spelling mistakes... I would recommend the book to my sister she loves books like this. I would rather this book a solid 5 out of 10 .. "

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Wow. Amazing chapter

"Amazing chaoter. Wow"

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Spicy

"Great story keeping you in suspense all the time. Needs to get someone to Prof read the book before it gets published. I have enjoyed the story so far hope the rest of the book is as good as the last chapters."

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Would read again

"I loved this book, it was simple, spicy and overall really well written. I would read this again and I would recommend it to others."

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Wow

"Lovely written "

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The new girl

"I’m loving this story can’t wait to read more "

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The new girl

"I didn't like that some words were misspelled but I love the plot I would recommend it to my friend's I chose this rating because I find the rating realistic"

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Attention grabbing

"Definitely helps you feel the characters emotions and sets a good scene. Some spelling and wrong words placed is a little distracting, but the passion is still felt even with Harvey's thoughtful and gentle nature."

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Great book

"This book is well written and I can’t wait to see what happens next"

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Great chapter

"Just want to keep reading and find out what happens next great story "

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ILOVE ITTT

"So far this is AWESOME. Cant wait for you to finish the story<33333 The grammar and punctuation need a lil help but dw ur doing greatttt. "

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Nice

"I like the plot. Its exciting and passionate. There are some spelling errors here and there but i dont mind. "

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