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A beautiful account of Jim and Pam’s first date!

"I REALLY enjoyed this story! I am a huge Jim and Pam fan and love the romance of their relationship. So to come across a story of their first date, which was written so beautifully and so true to their characters, it was a joy.. I read the story, then reread it immediately, even though it was well after midnight. I think the author captured their first date exactly as it would have been, their feelings, their physicality, their nerves and their intimacy. I loved the fact that Jim came back into the conference room to talk to Pam to make arrangements for the date, and I love the fact he took her to her favourite childhood restaurant. It was all simply beautiful, and I know I will read this again. Technical writing skills? Well, I am no writer, but I do read a lot. The author’s style was easily as good as, if not better than, a lot of published books that I have read. It simply drew me in and kept me captivated. There was a satisfying amount of dialogue and narrative.. It was a lovely length too - I think it must have taken me about half an hour to read. So a blissful half an hour of Pam and Jim in love - a delight to read. If the author writes anything else, about Jim and Pam, I would read it in a heartbeat. In fact if the author ever writes a full novel, I would read that too."

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