Neat twist on an old story

"This was a fun story because you took characters that we all know and love and, not only stayed true to their characters, but also added onto them and gave them new layers. I liked their interaction and the way that you pulled things together. It felt very reminiscent of the Harry Potter mischief. My only criticism is that I think the dialogue was a little clunky in places and didn't quite sound natural. Great work! I think that the ending was my favorite part. I hope that you do well in the contest!"