Unexpected Love

"Summary and story don't match at all. The story time line and important actions get twisted and seems like there are so many stories in one but really it's just sped up and confused. It was a great idea but the execution wasnt the best, Her technical skills are actually pretty good though. The writer should continue to write but triple check her time line and the actions her characters have done, pay attention to the little things because they can change the ehole story, and not speed up or contradict the character. "