Where and when it comes to an end

"This is a beautiful piece of fiction! It has a good story idea, but I would love to see it be made into something bigger. There were some mistakes with the technical skills, but there was nothing that couldn't be fixed without some revision. One thing that bothers me is when there is no space between the period and the next sentence. Please keep writing and practicing, and don't let critical people get in your way. Keep writing!"