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Confusing but interesting

"The story jumps a little hit despite this it's good when you figure it out I'm enjoying the book format "

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Mesmerizing Him

"I liked the twist, glad she is alive with the hope someone will find out she is. Moreover, her brother and Mason do not do anything out of the box believing she died. Her dad well; he went begging (lol). Then you have Parker! How long does he believe (even though she has amnesia) he can keep her there? My fingers are crossed that she remembers everything about his fake death. Yes I would recommend this to friends! Not going to lie it caught me off guard her being alive, had some emotional moments at the mention of her death. But good work!"

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Confused

"This is twisted. Enjoyed but in the dark."

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Mesmerizing him

"Loved the book!! Cant wait for the sequel..i want her to be with mason please!!!!"

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OMG It’s seriously powerful!

"Can’t wait to read more and the next book!!!"

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Was good

"I was not so keen with the first few chapters in the beginning but as the plot got interesting, it was interesting. Not sure what is hidden in book 2, Mason and Parker love one girl Ammi? Will be fun reading this. 🤪"

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Mesmerising him

"Loved it Can't wait to read the next one😍😍🤩🤩🤩🤩"

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Mesmerizing him

"One word: PERFECT! It's an amazing book, can't wait to read book 2. "

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Rollercoaster

"I do love the ups and downs. Lots of twists here and there. Some a bit disjointed but overall I kept reading because it was a fun action book. Looking forward to the next one"

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Mesmerizing Him

"I love the plot and craziness in this story but there are a lot of grammar mistakes that needs to get corrected . I would recommend it to people who like mafia romance / dangerous kinda romance . That's all :) keep up the great work ! "

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Mesmerizing Him

"This novel has a very good storyline and strong characters. Its quite entertaining. Just needs to be edited especially the frequent use of "too" when it should be "to". I am more intrigued with the next book "Misplaced" with unexpected ending of this one."

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Mesmerizing Him

"Amazing story! Loved the bumps and cliffhangers. It was not what I expected at all, keep it up! Can't wait to continue reading Ammi and Mason's story. ❤❤❤"

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Great!!!!

"Love the book! Super good!"

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Mesmerizing Him

"Omg.... this book is full of twist and turns very steamy yet scary very sad in some parts and didn't see that coming in other very good book excellent plot strong characters..nicely written "

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Mesmerizing Him

"How do you write so beautifully... OMG!! Ur story has got me addicted to it.. keep it up.. love and God bless."

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Great story

"Awesome story!! Liked the way author expressed every moment of the story.... "

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Love this book

"I honestly love everything about this book and have no complaints whatsoever. I would recommend this book to my best friend. "

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Unknown

"Great story love love love it"

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Ammi and mason

"This read is so good i dont want to put it down can't wait to complete"

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Loveeeeee this book

"♥👏Great story "

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