Interesting

"This is the first Rise of the Guardians fanfiction I have ever read, and I enjoyed it. I liked the comparison that you made between Jack and the wind and the description of their relationship. It made me think of the movie in a new way. I'm not sure that present tense worked very well in the story and some areas had clunky wording, but those should be relatively easy to fix. Well done! I would love to see more of this sort of fanfic. :)"