What is your opinion?
Spider and Elf
"Opposite attraction is so strong in this story,love it. Beautiful and strong characters. Flowing from light to dark perfectly. Well done"
I can't believe I forgot to review it back then।
"Outstanding story line & presentation skill Thank you author"
Reviewing Spider and the Elf by Rima Herzaki (ABSOLUTELY WOW)
"TW: All-caps letters First off, I read a lot of stories with different genres, and I don’t really mind what genre it is, as long as it’s captivating, interesting, and absolutely great, which THIS STORY IS, ALONG WITH THE AUTHOR’S OTHER WORKS. I READ THIS BOOK FOR LIKE ONLY HALF A DAY, I DIDN’T DO ANYTHING EXCEPT READ IT BECAUSE IT WAS JUST SO GOOD (thank gosh I finished all of my responsibilities cos I slacked my butt off to read this delectable piece of writing that I say is *chef’s kiss*), KFC BETTER WATCH OUT, THIS BOOK IS OUT FOR THE THOSE DELICIOUS CAKES AND ICE CREAMS COS THIS THAWED AND MELTED ME AND MY HEART, IT’S SO SWEET, NOTHING CAN COMPARE 🥹 ILY AUTHOR SINCE A LONG TIME AGO, AND MY LOVE STARTED WHEN I FIRST READ “Her Seduction” in Wattpad TEEHEE, RAWR. ANYWAYS, continuing on ehem ehem, This is just so dreamy that me, a closeted masochist discovered that I liked romance with a balanced mixture (or should I say, blend) of love and pain ♥️ I enjoyed the story a whole lot; everything about the story satisfied me and I really really loved the main characters; I noticed that the majority preferred Eon, but I favored En more than anyone, I like him, he was dangerous and I liked that, especially because he could be gentle and caring if he wanted to (I’m not gonna say sweet, cos y’know). The plot, events that happened and its flow, your way of writing, the characters (including their background, personalities/attitudes, and relationship/interaction with other characters), and of course, the book itself was impeccable and it made me satisfyingly content that I CAN’T COMPLAIN. Though, there were a few spelling errors but my brain can’t even notice or process it properly because it automatically corrects it 💀 I understand that though, when I write, I tend to miss the errors I made. And, I know this is a short story, but I think I was really curious and expected more reactions and more parts (or context) about some certain parts, such as about Amnestria and her love with another spider (also more context about this spider being the sibling of En and Eon), how Kenia felt and mourned for the death of other Elves, especially her parents’, Kenia and Faelyn crossing paths again after Kenia and En/Eon mated), Ayen and Aias, Elanil and Faelyn’s feelings towards En/Eon and Kenia’s relationship, and that’s all :- ) I can also describe the book as: When you read it, it draws you in more and more, keeping you focused -captivating you (like I said). I’m gonna say this a few times throughout this review because I literally have to say it, because it was so sweet, I was always so curious to see what will happen to them or what will happen next, the book is also so creative and poetic and it fit the theme of the story a lot. I could also feel the emotions, feelings, and their love for each other (Kenia and En/Eon), and you were able to write and express it very nicely that my heart was bouncing throughout the story. I also love love love their relationship, and I AM WISHING I was Kenia, so I can have En and Eon (as my mate) 😆 I also admire that you have made Kenia have a different character, because majority write their characters the same with all their different books, and so, I’m pleasantly surprised with that, Kenia is courageous and refreshing. I also loved that their relationship/love trope was literally water x fire, I love that 🔥 I’m a water sign and I loved to see some water sign x fire sign ❤️ So, now I’ll go read the other books and after reading all of them, I’ll keep rereading them until my my insatiable hunger for the author’s books runs out (which is impossible, honestly). I’m so so happy and glad I discovered the author and their works, because I kept smiling, laughing, and grinning like a fool when I read their books *dreamy sigh* Now you know, now go read this (COS WHY WOULDN’T YOU) and the other books (I also recommend Her Seduction in Wattpad) of the author before you exhale your last breath *peace sign* Also Author, please always take care, be healthy, and enjoy life, and we, fans, will always support and cheer for you no matter what, COS you’re just so great, thank you so much for your stories and I wish to support you more soon, be well! ❤️ ASHGFHSJCKSKAHA"
This is so cool
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Spider and the Elf
"OMG, I loved this story, 100/10! I am an aspiring writer myself and I am so inspired by this, not to mention I fell in love with Eon and En, and Kenia (I forgot her name, sorry if I wrote it wrong) Please keep writing, I would love a Sequel."
Loved
"Loved this, thank you for your wondering stories again "
AMAZING
"I absolutely ADORE this story! I would have loved more spicy sex details though of course <u< maybe even a sequel with their kids? :0 That would be amazing as well!! Eeeeeeep! Thank you so much for making this story! It's truly unique and captivating! I do hope you continue to write! You may possibly be one of my new favorite authors! "
Was tuff
"This was AWSOME "
Amazing book
"This book is one of my best reads here on inkitt. I would refer this book to everyone cuz the plot is amazing and d characters are😍 "
Spider and the Elf
"This book was so intresting!! It constatantly had me on the edge of my seat with each and every turn. You did an amazing job at making Eon and En and their characters! Overall amazing read!! And super unique."
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"This Story Melted my heart... It is one of the best books that I have read so far... The way you can tell if its a good book is if you can connect with the Characters. Also if it makes you laugh and cry or angry or empathetic, This book was so amazing I was able to connect with the character on a soul level and It made me laugh and cry. Also the way you worded things was amazing"
Love your book! Ever since I read it for the first time a few years back, and I know it was a while since you changed from Wattpad to Inkitt, but I didn't had the chance to download Inkitt, always kept forgetting to do it, but now that I have, this story was the first one I looked for, and I'm so happy i did, I missed Eon, and even jackass En.
"Simply LOVE your story. "
Ensnared
"Perfectly paced and sweet and vicious ❤️"
Spider and the Elf
"Great story! I found this story thoroughly engaging with an interesting and captivating storyline. I thought the story was well organized leaving plenty of room to branch other stories off of it. I can only hope that Kenia can resolve the conflict between her family."
Story that u can't put it down
"This is that type of story that keep you to read until u finished it Soo lovely ,amazing,heartwarming ♥️♥️ I really love the story line , character ending Love u 😍 keep it up , keep writing 👍🏻 Recommend to all Find ur self into new world y'all gonna love it"
Spider and the Elf
"Great book with an excellent writing style and an interesting plot. I would definitely recommend this to others"
Great Book
"I have read this book before on Wattpad and I’m happy that I can finally finish reading it. I could reread this book over and over again. I love the characters and the chemistry between Kenia and Eon/En. "
great book!!
"The author is a fantastic writer "
My favorite!!
"Literally the best. Incredible world building and character building, along with great character development on both ends throughout. Also v sexy lol"
Amazing!
"I want more stories in this word. It's beautiful!"
