54 चैप्टर पढ़े
Dancing flames
"Great read thank you for sharing your story with me "
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
58 चैप्टर पढ़े
I really enjoyed reading g dancing flames
"I really enjoyed reading dancing flames cant wait to read the next book ty"
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
2 चैप्टर पढ़े
Dancing flames
"I thought that it was great I did get confused at some points though. I like the way you write your dialogue and how you describe the character's feelings. It was interesting to read and really funny at some points. I like how you write it in a way, where it makes you feel like you are actually there, experiencing things with the characters. Also, I don’t know if you have, but can you try reading my book called Destiny Undecided and give me some feedback. "
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
27 चैप्टर पढ़े
Awesome....!!
"Awesome and interesting book.. The author is dang creative and the twists and turns totally got me... Keep writing girl..!! Looking forward to read more interesting books from ya...!! "
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
12 चैप्टर पढ़े
Keep on being Awesome!!
"I love the book and the plot! you have a nice writer's future ahead of you girl! Don't let anybody take away your talent! I hope to stay updated with every book you make! If you could review my books I would love that! Have a good one!"
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
8 चैप्टर पढ़े
Amazing book.
"I love it!!!"
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
53 चैप्टर पढ़े
Dancing flames
"Good book got lost for a little bit but it straightened out after a few paragraphs. The story it self was good as you said you caught everything up to the end. "
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
0 चैप्टर पढ़े
Dancing flames
"The story is okay, but it doesn't flow naturally. It's like bits and pieces of a puzzle that doesn't match nor add up. I'd recommend to revisit your story. Even though you are an amateur writer I can see that you were struggling with the flow. Pay attention to your grammatical punctuation. Make sure to make use of the proper time period to show the stories timeline accurately. There is a huge gap in-between scenes that makes it difficult to understand and follow. Other than above-mentioned, the plot of the story is good. Just work it a little more and you'll have a near perfect book. Xoxo 😘"
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
0 चैप्टर पढ़े
Dancing Flames
"I loved the book but not the end. Is there gonna be a follow up? I mean the Moon Goddess is in danger, this Ian devil needs to be killed. I loved reading your work. 🥰"
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
54 चैप्टर पढ़े
Okay
"The plot is okay it's not much happening lot family friendly things going on. Waiting for the action to begin. I get lost a few times between chapters there's alot of characters and events going on. But overall it's a decent book I'm still reading just to see how it plays out. "
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
57 चैप्टर पढ़े
Dancing Flames
"It was a awful ending bc there was no battle whatsoever and that was a great beginning, middle but not end! FINISH THE ENDING bc that is not a ending."
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?