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Fantastic Work

"Really good story. A couple of minor things toward the end where you have chapter headings in the middle of the text that don't match up to the actual chapter, but those are very minor. I would love to chat with the author about using this as a basis for a series of short films. Please let me know if you have a complete files of the entire book available. Would love to own a copy."

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Welcome to hell please take a number

"I loved reading this! So many twists and turns. A few unexpected laughs. And many wonderful moments. "

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Cool

"Amazing story , theme and setting. Can not get enough of this read. Reminds me of a french writer writing about tanatonauts"

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Welcome to Hell

"This is one of the funniest books I’ve read in a long while. The humour is distinctly off the cuff, and the plot and characters are so endearing as to be childlike yet still appealing to adult readers of all ages. Puts me in mind of the humour of RR’s The Hollow Chocolate Bunnies of the apocalypse 5/5"

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A surprise I wasnt expecting

"I ran across this book and thought I'd give it a shot. I'm so happy I did. The plot is so refreshing and well thought out. The actual writing is well done and the jokes are sooo good! It makes me laugh all the time. I cant wait to see what happens at the end, but on the same note I dont want it to end. "

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Cool twisty story

"I like the character interaction. Needs a bit more background for the main character though. Has had me laughing throughout the book. A+ "

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Fun & engaging

"A fun & enjoyable read with fantastic dialogue from hilarious characters. Definitely worth the time & look forward to future stories from Mr. Maloney. "

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Welcome to Hell. Please take a ticket.

"Loved it though ending weak compared to excellent start. Read it to kids over several bedtimes with a few edits. Most adult jokes over children's heads so good for large age range. Kids loved it and illustrated book would be great, scary bits removed for youngsters. They wanted a Franken teddy for weeks after. At 6 and 8 they love to be scared a little within reason focusing on the humour mainly."

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Still giggling

"Loved the dry humour of all the different characters. Really enjoyed the story. "

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