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His human luna

"I did not like the dislike of the wolves to the human. Why did you choose these names for the Luna they are very different. I thought that the tiger part was strange but not bad. Great plot though. I like that even the temp Luna was helping to save his mate."

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His human Luna

"Like the story so far can't wait whats gonna happen next"

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Must keep reading.... lol

"There are some grammical errors, but I can't stop reading it keeps pulling me in."

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Great!

"Keeps me intrigued "

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His human luna

"I love it not like other books I've read! "

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His human luna

"She is human in a world of werewolves,fighting to live a life as well as she can yet seems like danger around every corner"

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Human mate

"I enjoy the plot and how the story is coming together. Also like the suspense. Wish chapters were a bit longer . "

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Human luna

"Good story. Like it so far!"

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Great story

"Please continue to write"

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why every story has no ending here..its realy annoying

"any story in this app why they have no endings "

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His Human Luna

"The book is great! Is thete a sequel? I hope so..."

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His human mate

"I liked the book and yes I would recommend it to my friend and I rate it 5 because I can I understand the contents"

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Hhhjh

"OK cc me on the email address and I will send you a copy of the invoice for the next week or so to see if it is "

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Unique story about werewolves i have read for now. I wish blade had told nibiru sooner and i really want to know nibiru real identity. Ice princess or vampire or what?

"Unique story about werewolves i have read for now. I wish blade had told nibiru sooner and i really want to know nibiru real identity. Ice princess or vampire or what?"

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His human luna

"I like it because I like wolfs. I reacamend puting blade more in the story"

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His Human Luna

"I love the plot twists. The human Luna turns out to be hiding something. And from what I gather, she apparently doesn't even realize her true heritage. Writing in first-person is difficult for me now. I appreciate and love anyone who does first-person writing, I personally don't use that point of view anymore due to how often I seemed to merge with my characters. Either way, there's some words that you didn't spell correctly. Ex: Injuries Singular: Injury Plural: Injuries The way you spelled it had a "y" that shouldn't have been there. Sorry if it came out as mean or rude. And deep apologies if your first language isn't English. I just felt like someone should give you constructive criticism since nobody else did. Tip: when doing the thoughts or mind-links, try to use italics. You don't have to if you don't want to, but it's just a suggestion."

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His human luna

"Interesting and ot many surprises as well as flashback. Can't wait to finish my reading. "

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Love it

"Really love this story"

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Amazing!!

"OMG!!! I love this story so much. The plot twists are amazing!! Can't wait for you to post more!!"

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His Human Luna

"I Think this novelette deserved the rating that i gave 5 stars because i really think it is a good read."

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