of Fire and flowers

"First of all, thank you so much for writing this story. I always wanted to see Roy Mustang and Riza Hawkeye end up together ever since I started watching Full Metal Alchemist all those years ago. The plot is great, the flashback portions are very neat which leads to no confusion. The alternate POV of both lead characters gives the reader a better understanding and creates bigger anticipation of what lays ahead. However, given that it's a love story of an military alchemist, perhaps there could have been some elements of fights or alchemy to it. And though I love the happy ending and how the murder charges were lifted, maybe the readers could know more about the active part of the investigation that led to the anticlimax. All in all, the storyline was very well plotted. The elements of romance made the story fun without being cheesy. The characters were truly lovable. In my humble opinion, I just miss a little bit of fight/investigation and alchemy in the story. ♥ A great read indeed! ♥"