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Best story

"I don’t even know how to put into words how good your writing is. Every line was so engaging, and your characters feel so real. Honestly, your talent is unmatched! I’m dying to know when will you be sharing your new story?"

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Great job

"This book is one of the best fanfics I have ever read and I want to see the rest of the work this author has written. "

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Funny

"I really enjoyed this book. The bickering between the two was so funny. I did expect them to fall in love at the end. What I didn’t enjoy was all the misspelled words."

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Aww

"I loved it. Absolutely loved it. No other words needs to be said."

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Not Bad

"Not a bad story! A few grammatical errors and the ending felt rushed but it ended happily enough so well done. :)"

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First Inkitt story

"Funny and hot, though I had a lot of questions. The delayed consummation had me feeling Severus’ frustration too! Thanks for writing!"

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