The Beta's Daughter

ktkirata: The story is really interesting. How the character described in the story is like you can see them and picture how they move, talk and feel in the every plots. Well done writer and keep it up.

Hester: Very good, was short too the point , not lingering on the abuse, pity you didn’t let him step in earlier knowing the abuse was happening, but this is almost real for some women who have gone through it, just wish they could all have a princess at te end of thete tunnel

Catherineb83: Story good just would have liked her not to wear a mask

lblomme: I always love a story where good overcomes evil. The sad start, the growth, and ultimate strength of the main character was well done. The story never lagged and ultimately delivered a happy ending even for characters who were less than stellar. Well done!

caldwtd: A bit of sweet in a world of violence. I enjoyed this story, and angst of each character believing they should not have these feelings towards each other. I did struggle with her seeming to be a bad ass, but yet was always so negative about herself, her negativity was a bit too much for my liking, I...

Isarah: I can't stop smiling, though! It's so sweet, so good, and I absolutely love it! Thank you, author! ❤️

Jeanne: A lovely story without endless drama. Just 2 people finding each other. Truly enjoyable. Goal achieved! Thank you.

Read4Free16: Heartwarming

Susan: Nice short story. I liked it