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Great fun to read

"Another about eyes but overall great would love to see another one on this"

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Tribute to Obi Wan Kenobi

"This story is really good,it's really sad,of how love for another individual can drive a person to sacrifice himself,sacrifice his identity,and who he really is,just to save his loved ones,anyways,back to the story,its really good and you "catch our feelings so that we get caught up in the star wars world,anyway keep writing stories and ill be hanging around for more good luck see ya"

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"I really liked the main idea behind the story and emotion that pushed it forward. Good use of emotion and a great twist on the story."

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