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The Time Catalyst
"This author has writing talent. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"
Loved it 😍
"Loved it. I'd love more of it. I read it on one afternoon. I would so recommend it to everyone, great writing, easy to read."
Good Sci-Fi read
"In general a good Story. Great for a quick read with only 22 chapters so far. The story itself is pretty cool and coherent in its plot. It, though, could really use some proofreading or editing... there are some misspellings etc. in there"
"The Time Catalyst"
"Joseth, If this makes you feel any better, I have done 135 Reviews of Books to date, and my review for you is 5 stars......Your story is well developed and beyond interesting. Great imagination. The Main Characters are simple to follow along with your story and the plot is well defined, with some twists and turns.. The facts are that a great, secret project is developed by Patrick, with Thomas, his leading scientist and leader in the project. A project that will better the world when development is finished, to bring power to the world at a price affordable to all. The Twist occurs when anomalies occur during testing. Then the twist, brilliantly written by you, enters three new so called hired men to work for Miracles Corp, from the future, later in the story, to steal the receiver of the equipment that was being constructed, the SCR. Then comes another Time Traveler, with threats to Patrick that he destroy the SCR or this Traveler is instructed to kill Patrick.......basically, the story continues, a fight ensures, the cops are called, the Receiver is taken by the 3 bad guys, and because the SCR is not able to function, the time travelers cannot return to their time, but can only transport locally in Seattle Washington where this story takes place.......really complicated story, well written, so forgive me if I haven't done justice to you and your excellent ability as a Story teller and Author...........Great work, wow the world my friend............. william elliott kern..........https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/185550 Dead or Alive...please review my book."
The Time Catalyst
"The story has potential, but it needs a lot of work. Characters had little differentiation. The dialogue sounded very similar from each of the characters. The conflict felt very contrived.there were also several holes in the plot that need to be filled through character action and less exposition."
