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Utopia

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Summary

Utopia ~ an imaginary place or state in which everything is perfect Only if all of life could be described as such. Then if everything was perfect life would be uneventful and there would be nothing to write about. Enter Utopia where it is anything but such.

Status
6yrs ago
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

You Only See Me

You only see me

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You never see her.

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One slip up

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And everything falls to the floor.

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I get the cussing

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I get the blaming.

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Can't take it anymore

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Someone please shut the door.

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You make me look worse

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You make me appear as the monster

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But 'cause you're blinded

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It's all you'll ever see.

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You know what

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Just blame it on me

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'Cause one day I promise you

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I'll burst and I'll say what's on my mind

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Just wait till I'm eighteen and people will start to believe

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You aren't the nice person behind that façade

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You are the monster I see everyday

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The monster I wish I could shut out

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Someone please shut the door.

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I have have more to say but

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Someone please shut the door.

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Good Writing

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