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10/10 would break my heart again

"This was a beautifully written story that both warmed and utterly killed me. The pov. made me really connect with Kaoru, and I was desperately wanting happiness in the end. I found it was realistic in the sense of both grief, anger, and the confusion that comes with those deep emotions. Overall I found it to be a flawless tragedy, and I am thankful for it gracing me with its bittersweet presence."

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His Name Is Hikaru Hitachiin

"OMG OMG OMG how could... ugh okay you had me bawling my eyes out. I was sitting next to my mother and she was watching a anime through headphones. She happened to look over at me and she was like scared because. I was smiling so big it hurt and sobbing she took her headphones off and asked me what was wrong. I couldn't even speak I made her read it and she was the same exact way."

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Excellent story

"I have no idea what is the fandom you are writing for, so I don't know anything about the characters, but I liked your summary so I decided to try your story. And what a story that was!! I loved your writing style, I loved how you described the emotions so well; I felt the pain of Kaoru, I felt the desperation and the need to have his brother alive and awake. You did a great job. Thank you for sharing."

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