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"Love, love ,loved it! Despite the grammar, spelling and tense errors you held onto the plot. Definitely give this a re-read to make corrections. You placed a lot of heart in your characters which made it more palpable to accept Ariah as a fighter and leader. It was great to read a story with lead characters who were sexy, intelligent, affluent, talented and African Americans!!! Awesome read!"

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Amazing books!!

"It was one of the best stories I’ve read!!"

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"This was an amazing story 🥰🥰🥰🥰"

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"Amazing story I really enjoyed it, I finish is 2 days."

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WOW...I Loved The Journey

"Not what I expected at all but I really enjoyed it. Great book. Please keep writing."

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"When I found your book, I was browsing through checking for books written by African American or books with African American characters...after reading the first chapter, I wanted to find out more about Ariah's character and her growth as an individual. Thank u for taking the time to show us what African Americans women go through, esp in the workplace..."

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"This story takes you on a thrilling roller coaster ride of emotions giving everything from the miracle of life to the tragedy of death and everything in between. The author has a candid way of describing scenes that feel real and totally believable. Her main characters are strong powerful Africa American individuals who fight for the right to be together without fear. Their love knows no bounds and propels them to survive showing a bonded connection one could hope to experience just once in this life. There’s love, sex, action and suspense for the making of a great story. Ariah is a black bad ass boss b****h and I love a strong female character. Bummed this is the end but I really enjoyed the journey of Silas and Ariah. Keaja Williams, I hope you don’t stop writing. You have so much more to tell with these characters alone. I’ve seen other writers spin up to 5 books off their main characters. You asked for suggestions...well here you go...lol. You could write about: 1. The secret love of Ariah’s mother and James; her back story, psychic abilities and relationship with her sister, Ariah’s aunt... 2. How the Collective began... 3. Tristians story, homeless kid saved by the kindness of James...maybe he and Jade fall in love. 4. Jades story 5. Charles story See where I’m going. Think about it...I’d read them for sure!!! What every you decide, thank you for the journey and best of luck."

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