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The patient

"What an amazing story and way of storytelling.. Dialogues ,explanation everything was on point .. Every character was special and unique.. Overall wonderful book"

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Intense

"Another great read! I literally can imagine your stories playing out as if a movie in my mind. Love!"

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the patient

"extraordinary, amazing. I just can't find the best word to describe this story. your writing skills are off the top. it grabs your attention only a few paragraphs in and keeps coming. after reading this i wonder why i stopped reading all together. with work like this you could be among the greats. It's fast paced and everything just falls into place smoothly. i love the characters and their interactions. even being a short story it includes some of their histories and personalities. but i have to say, that the security guard was my favorite. he was funny, cowardly and brave all in one. i was on the edge of my seat the entire time. thank you so much for sharing."

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The paitent

"I loved this book! Even though at some parts i almost shat myself. Definitely worth it! "

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Clever

"I like this writer's writing technique. It pulls you into the story as a silent character and gives you all the feels of the main ones. Loved Carrie in this! She did things I would have done. The close calls, the sacrifices and the clever way the writer drew me to the denouement was pretty cool."

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It was ok kinda creppy.

"Wish it was longer spooky "

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