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KEEP WRITING!!!!

"Please keep writing about the characters. I know stories can't go on forever but this story is the only one that's made me laugh a few times and cry. I love the characters and story line all together. Make a sequel PLEASE?!?!"

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Warning

"Book hasn’t been updated in over 4 years. Such a great read but finishes on a cliffhanger:/"

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Good read

"This book is a amazing story the plot twists are good .. only thing is some of the spelling isnt good & also there is sometimes words added where not needed "

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The Vampire King

"Well written. I enjoyed this story and want the book 2."

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Vampire king

"Amazing book "

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Really good read

"This story has me hooked, hope u do an update soon 🙂"

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wow

"Um hi this is my first time on this website... And This book caught my eye... I love it.... Its beautiful and the storyline is amazing... I think that you are doing an amazing Job writing and i hope you will write more.... I can't tell you enough times how You have done such an amazing job, I'm writing a book myself on a different website... but im not as good at it... I hope that someday when my book is finished that it could be as amazing as yours....."

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The vampire king

"I like this book would love to read more, great story."

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The vampire king

"I absolutely loved this story!! "

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The Vampire King

"Please update this story. The cliff hanger is killing me as to how the story ends. The was a really good story."

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Love it

"Loved ghetto way she was able to save Jasper at the end but so needs a sequel to finish it off properlay "

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Wow!

"I love all ur characters and all the twists Tbh I don't know what to say except that I am loving ur book and I can't wait for more😅❤ I really love ur book❤"

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The Vampire King

"Everything is good so far. The plot and characters are well written."

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plot

"plot changes a bit but good so far!"

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Vampire King

"I think that the plot changes to much and i lose interest "

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The vampire king

" I love it can't wait for the next chapter "

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Hello

"I really love your book, cant get enough of it. Gonna be sad when I finally finish reading it. "

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Wow

"Cannot wait for the update "

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The Vampire King

"I love everything about this book please update!!!!!! I am so excited to meet her alter ego so bad I d ok not know what I'll do if you dont update please I am begging you!!!"

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Vampire king

"Love the storyline, dragged a little bit though"

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