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A story of a boy who fell in love with a girl but fate has some other plans as he faces betrayal along the way.
A big thanks to my friend taha syed, who pointed out the lows & corrected most of the grammatical mistakes.
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Mary Wilkins: This was an enjoyable short story. Well done! 😄👏🏾👏🏾
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Kelley: Love the story line! Ryder needs to getvhiavhead out of his ass tho!
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Pav: Well written and enticing, love your style, keep up with good work.
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jo987_123: This is a good story, but it needs a good editor to go through this iteration and fix the mistakes. The pov changes from 1st person to 3rd person, often, and sometimes within one sentence. It needs a liberal sprinkling of punctuation marks throughout, and a decision needs to be made about the char...
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emmylee.p.: Funny, cute, heartwarming, good writing, great characters, and a bit of spice
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mutondimaluleke: Amazing story, loved every bit of it. I definitely recommend
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