What is your opinion?
Cannot wait for the next chapters 🤩
"This was the first thing I read on Inkitt. Honestly, this is a great dip into how the novels on this are. Could not recommend more!"
Fantastic writing
"I just finished your book and absolutely loved it! The story was gripping and the characters were fantastic. I’d love to chat more about your ideas and maybe discuss some potential collaborations. "
Artistic Fusion & Reading Adventures!
"Sup Reading_Mermaid08 , I’m Camillia, an illustrator and a big fan of your story. After reading it, I was really inspired by your work and had some ideas that could add a visual element to your narrative.I have some unique and exciting ideas that could visually elevate your story, making it even more captivating for your audience. Email: camilliacampbell(94)(@)gmail(dot)com I specialize in digital art and character illustrations, and I’d love to help bring your characters and scenes to life. Whether you need book covers, promotional art, or something else, I can create high-quality illustrations at a reasonable price. Discord: camilliaaa If you’re interested, I’d love to chat about how to make your story even more engaging. Looking forward to hearing from you! Best, Camillia Instagram: camillia_campbell You can also check out my work on my social handles! "
Great read
"I just started this book I am already hooked. A dystopian society forcing the population to procreate is wild but I can’t wait see what the other chapters holds"
Love it
"There’s a few spelling errors that are throwing be, but nobody is perfect and otherwise I love this so far. Can’t put it down"
Didn’t kind of story line!
"This is a great story!! Nothing like other stories I have been reading!! I am loving it!"
So far so good
"I'm liking it so far. Can't wait for the rest."
So far so good
"So far only eight chapters are up so i might be reviewing too soon. But i'm like it so far."
It’s giving Hand Maids Tale & much more!
"I would recommend this book to anyone looking for a rare, hand-maids tale-esque book. I like the characters so far and feel extremely bad for them. This book is becoming easily more and more relatable to with the emotions laid out. I think the POV’s of the medics vs the breeders are a really nice touch. Can’t wait to read more! "
Breeders
"I was intrugied from the very start but was put of a little by the grammer errors. (Tip for Author: have a friend read your story to help with grammer) There was a slight lack of detail and I feel there could have been more background set up, but I love the plot, characters, and suspense! Great quick read 10/10 recommend for fans of dystopian romances."
Short Review
"It's not bad. It's a bit boring, to be honest. There's nothing that makes you want to read the rest of the book. "
The Breeders
"The books is alright. However, there are many grammar and spelling mistakes. I also feel like you should’ve added more context about the pods. At some points, I was definitely confused. I think it was fine! I’m bummed its a dead end book."
Very good!
"I'm reading this with a friend, and we both are really enjoying this book. There are a few grammatical and capital errors, and the characters become predictable, but I would give this a 4.5 if I could."
Breeders - Chapter 4
"Good start - great hook. Characters handled well for the most part. A little emotionally confusing in the Pod. Many grammar and spelling errors kept dropping me out. Mars (co-protag) & Danielson (Antag.) need more development. D's overshare destroys the mystery for the reader - and answers way too many questions. Human fetus' share stem cells with the mother - meaning damage to her body is repaired at a faster rate than normal. Yes there are permanent physical/mental changes but a number of health benefits to the mother as well - lower incidence of several cancers etc. If this is the "natural route" you may want to consider breastfeeding before the children are taken (bonus of greater trauma? or a way to nurse w/o connection? or not allowed to nurse their own? or they have wetnurses on staff???). The nipple absorbs baby siliva and the mothers milk adjusts to the needs of the growing baby as it's nursing. Also - How do the breeders really talk or communicate? Would expect higher intellects to find innovative ways to communicate secretly. Suggest researching how inmates operate inside of prisions. Happy writing!"
Good start
"I like how the story develops, but I'm not the biggest fan of super short paragraphs. Overall, it's a good start"
The Breeders
"is pretty good so far. I dont line being forced to write a review when i am only 4 chapters into a book. We shall see"
The Breeder
"It's Alright"
The Breeder
"1Its a good story with a hook and growing plot development hopefully good potential. ! 1 i"
A fine story
"Its a good story with a hook and growing plot development "
Tube baby
"Not nice sad "
