Potterhead's review for a Dramione fanfiction story

"Hi~You'd been doing great job for your story! I could proudly to say that your story was one of the best one about Granger Family Reunion theme. I laugh a lot, specialy when Hermione's annoy cousins try to flirt Draco, lamo~~Being a Potterhead, I'm very proud. When I read till the scene that every one in Hogwarts met again each other, I was feel very peaceful, very proud for somehow. In total, your story is amazing~~ You deffinetly bring a lot of important emotions, other wise, I think you should bring some bit more of angrily, and the end may have more details. Because I feel that, the story kinda end a bit quickly. But it was ok, so...Good Job~~~ And GOOD LUCK!!"