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Great

"Keep writing really enjoying "

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Blue Daisy

"Whoa... a greaat one indeed loved every bit of it... amazing😍😍😍great job.. hoping to see another creativity of ours..🤩jst loved it!!!!!! Would love to know abt d past of Bryson and Daisy though...😅"

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Daisy Blue World 💖💖

"the story is good. i noticed from the female’s pov. she used ‘it’ instead of ‘he’ or ‘she’. dunno if that’s the author style of writing but all in all, it’s great. keep up! "

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♥️♥️

"love the ending of chapter 20. They like took a vow !!! 😻😻"

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Daisy Blue World

"Story is good, some flaws on the grammars but nothing major. all in all it’s good and interesting. "

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Daisy blue world

"story is great cant wait for the finale and when bryson find out bout daisy’s life "

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Interesting. Love it ♥️

"The story is interesting. You keep wondering what happen to Daisy, writing style is good too. "

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Daisy Blue World

"I like the plot of this book, it keeps you wondering. not wanting to put the book down, wantimg to find out about her life. The author need the assistance of someone to read and remediate her use of grammar, especially personal pronouns and the writing of the tenses. For those reasons, i rated the story according to my knowledge. "

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💓💓💓💓

"Loved the ending of this chapter!!!!"

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Daisy blue world

"Too many grammatical plus spelling errors. Spoiled the reading. Narrative nice however. Storyline captivating. Made you wanna know the ending "

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