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"The story is really nice but you do know it is on there twice"

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Great

"I liked this a lot and it’s better than the actual plot. Please make more "

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Lovely Loyalty

"I really like fan fiction wherein Draco gets to show himself a much more decent man than he's usually portrayed. This one was really swell."

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Draco makes a difference

"While I was reading towards the end the story kept on repeating the same words I had just read and it would frustrate me to no end but I do like this story overall great job🙂"

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SUPPER BAD GRAMMAR

"IT REPEATED THE STORY TEICE AND REPEATED DIFLINES AS WELL IT HAS VERY BAD GRAMER BUT GOOD PLOT BUT ALS9 IT N3EDS A PATD 2"

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