Inkitt
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Love it

"I'm so happy you reposted this version its always been one of my favorites and as crazy as Kyle is he will always be a favorite bad guy of mine"

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Unwanted

"Good book full of twist in the plot. Glad that she finally told her mother. Hope she gets to meet Victor again."

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Unwanted daddy

"Very good story. Holding my interest..would recommend this book to all my friends to read"

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Unwanted daddy

"Wonderful story cant wait for the rest"

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No fucking words its amazing the plot twist🤩🤩🤩🤩

"Amazing story and the pot is amazing as well"

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"It has extremely good content. You can publish you work on NovelStar App and earn big time."

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Unwanted Daddy

"Brilliant Book 🌟🌟🌟"

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Great book

"Great book"

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Unwanted Daddy

"This sequel was perfect for the first book. I enjoyed reading it, had plenty of plot twists. "

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Mood swings 🔥🔥❤️🥰

"This story made me have soo many mood swings for real. One minute am just enjoying the story and the other minute am like really, but really frustrated and sad in the same time, then am laughing when she put chilli on her dads food😂😂😂 nah for real this was all too much. "

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Obsessed daddy

"Awesome thriller story. Well written storyline. Wish there is part III. Love to read more story of victor and mae and what happen to daddy. "

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Obsessed daddy

"Awesome thriller story. Well written storyline. Wish there is part III. Love to read more story of victor and mae and what happen to daddy. "

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Unwanted daddy

"So interesting, I am enjoying it"

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Unwanted daddy

"I really enjoy this book so far mars character is complex. The story line keeps you guessing. I would reconnect this book to my fish's and to anyone who likes twisted plots. Can't wait to see what's next. "

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Great

"Great very interesting "

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Bad bad bad over possessive and obsessive daddy...

"Kyle is a pyshco... "

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Intense!!!! The Necklace explains alot.

"Intense intensity. This is something new i havent read this tipe of lust ever. Its like i could relate it scary though. I am in this like its real. Very excellent. I would recommend it to myself only. "

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unwanted daddy

"I love you ggfyjy and 6yy and I love you more than I can ever imagine of being able to make you feel like I am not going to be able to make it tomorrow sthandwa I have a headache and I am not going to be able to make it tomorrow sthandwa I have a headache and I am not going to be able to make "

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Unwanted daddy

"Really loving this story, i cant wait to finish reading it!"

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The first book was good, but this is even better!

"Omg I love this story so much. The first book was great but this is even better. What a fucked up dad! "

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